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Well written. I asspeculy like the line " streams of blood flow freely through channels of sound", I had to read that line a couple of times before I really got the beautiy of it. heh. Keep up the good work.
Everything is a work in progress. The day I finish a written piece is the day I stop living. And I like living even if I have to bleed sometimes. Not literally. I don't really bleed that often, except on the inside.
Some people say that I should write happy poetry. I tell them that I don't know how to. Besides, all my poetry is happy...whoever reads it should be happy that they're alive and able to read it. Like this poem. That's the feeling I get. Congrats.
Other people say that I write in short and choppy sentences but I assure you that that is not the case and that I can write in a run-on sentence with the best of them.
I cant live with out his music.
I love this. Well done
Some people say that I should write happy poetry. I tell them that I don't know how to. Besides, all my poetry is happy...whoever reads it should be happy that they're alive and able to read it. Like this poem. That's the feeling I get. Congrats.
Other people say that I write in short and choppy sentences but I assure you that that is not the case and that I can write in a run-on sentence with the best of them.